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Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2003-03-30 07:13 PM

There is a girl
perfect in every way
and nobody knows her, but me

With soft green eyes that sparkle
and a smile to melt stone
and nobody sees her, but me

With a voice gentile like a spring rain
Singing softly in the quiet
and nobody hears her, but me

With soft, supple lips
Hinting of sweet berries
and nobody tastes her, but me

With smooth, fair skin
And hair, red as the setting sun
and nobody feels her, but me

There is a perfect girl
If only in my dreams
and nobody knows

KWM

"The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more."
-Roy Suenaka

[This message has been edited by Wesley the Blue (03-30-2003 08:00 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-03-30 07:30 PM

Wesley - I enjoyed this very much. But, I think you meant "spring rain"....your letters got a little tossed around..lol..it happens to me all the time. Luckily we can go back in and "edit" if we want to. Other than that.....it was quite good. Chris

What did I tell ya? lol.. I had to edit my own!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (03-30-2003 07:31 PM).]

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

2 posted 2003-03-31 03:05 AM

In our dreams things can be as we want them and I think that's great. Good piece, thanks for sharing.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-03-31 05:29 AM

I stopped looking for a perfect girl...even in my dreams...almost perfect will suffice...then again I'm no where close to perfect and I should take that into consideration when looking...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-03-31 10:42 AM

Lovely and who knows. Maybe she's waiting for you somewhere. Love, Joyce

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2003-03-31 11:29 AM

She may be only in your dreams, but I'd be willing to bet she's out there somewhere just waiting for you to find her.

Nice job ... hugs for peace, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

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