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Ever Stretching On Through Time |
Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Forever... and so it goes... like the darkened Eve of Never on the day that passes by And light will dim through gauzes like a blindness that forsakes the ever flowing ribbons ever stretching on through time Together... and so we go... and the dark deceiving fetters all will fall along the way And light will shine much brighter as our kindness overtakes the ever blinding battles ever stretching on through time March 26,2oo3 If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963 [This message has been edited by Street Heart (03-26-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes let us hope that kindness overtakes. Worthy of my vote. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) And I believe for one to truly understand this with utmost heart, one must feel the pain in order to feel compassion for others! (sad sigh) I wish it wasn't as hard to realize this central truth but I think that is what creates kindness and appreciation to it, my prayers are with all the world, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Geoffrey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Another insightful write. I admire your writing and I voted. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Quite influenced by the present war, I see, with ribbons and battles. I like how love wins out in this one, though. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done...much enjoyed the read as I do all you write. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
StreetHeart--I like the circular feeling to this...as mankind does again what he did before and back again. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just popped in |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StreetHeart~ A remarkable piece. *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoy your writing.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thank you all for your responses.I was just sitting here at the 'puter,the day after my B-day,and this just popped in my head.It started as a rhythm and then flowed out pretty much as a lyric to a song.I can just make out the notes as I read it.Thanks again. Peace On Earth,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, good, Geoffrey! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Very super write. I voted on this. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
nicely done, indeed. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful write Geoffrey... as always m'friend. Maree |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Eliza Simmons |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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