Corner Pub #2 |
All you want |
Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
You want to be my friend But I can still feel The cold knife in my gut Betrayed You want me to forget Though the pain is fresh And the wounds still open Insulted You want me to forgive What you did to me But this I cannot do Hurt You kept things from me Told me all those lies For what I do not know Angered You did me all those "favors" That I did not ask for It only cause more pain Disgusted You have left my life I cant let you back in There is only one thing I feel FREE "Get busy living, or get busy dying. Thats damn right!" ~Shawshank Redemption |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wesley - you certainly got your point across with this one. Excellent!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
very nice. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Right to the point here - very good.
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