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beepzie
New Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 3

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:01 PM

Sasha

Her soft white coat,
Her playful ways,
I miss her so.

Walking along with her blood red lead,
She used to love that lead but now?
Now she is no more.

A rabbit!
To chase!
Accross the busy main road.

She struggled with her loved so lead,
I held her back in vain,
She did not give up,
She twisted round,
Chewed her way free from the blood red lead,

It came round that corner,
I saw it in a flash,
BANG!
It hits.
She's gone.
Her white coat now splattered with red,
Red like her lead,
Her blood...red...lead...

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2003-03-06 02:07 PM

i like the tragic and dark nature of your writing here. I feel for you if this is a true story.. and my prayers go out to her

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2003-03-06 02:41 PM

I've always had a dog while growing up as a young boy and remember many a day nursing one of my dogs, almost like one of the family, back to health and I also recall the sadness associated with losing such a pet as you have described here. This is such a tragic poem for one who loves animals, but one that I know is so true and really emphasizes the great thing that we have here in this forum to express ourselves even if the poems that are expressed here are about tragic events in our lives. A sad poem, but very well expressed.

-Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-03-06 08:09 PM

Yes I understand this one. My little Muffin had the same fate, because she wouldn't mind. Very emotional. Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2003-03-07 12:12 PM

Welcome and keep writing!

~Every girl has a dream within.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2003-03-09 06:11 PM

Poor Sasha.. she sounds like a lovely playful companion..
Nice to see another new face.. ahem, well, poet..

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

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