I gonna to make you an offer

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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

0 posted 2001-06-27 07:18 AM

I gonna to make you an offer
I know you can’t refuse.
I know you know that I love you
And you say that I amuse.

I gonna to make you an offer
I know you can’t say no.
For if you did, then I’d be dead,
Broken, I’d have no soul.

I gonna to make you an offer
I pray that you’ll say yes.
Tell me now, and I’ll wipe my brow,
I’ll know that I am blessed.

I gonna to make you an offer
It’s one I now repeat.
So let us now, renew our vows,
and make our life complete.

We're going for 31 more years.
Melton

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2001-06-27 07:50 AM

Awwwwwww Melton, this is so sweet...

Here's to 31 more!!! Bonnie

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-06-27 07:54 AM

Thank you Bonnie. We are "one" of the few that have truely found our soulmate. We exchanged poems on the 25th.

Melton

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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-06-27 10:19 AM

Oh, so glad you shared with us. this is wonderful. I'm glad you know how fortunate you are. Joyce

ShadowLost
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since 2001-06-23

Posts 43

4 posted 2001-06-27 02:55 PM

I have read some very passionate poetry here at Passions....very sweet and endearing.

Congratulations on your 31 years together.

~ShadowLost~

...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-06-27 03:18 PM

Congratulations! Long marriages are something to be proud of!

Betty Lou Hebert

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-06-27 10:21 PM

I do I do
accept your offer
let's make thirty two

hush
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since 2001-05-27

Posts 1653
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2001-06-27 10:43 PM

I think you have a very good grasp on human speech patterns and you use that really well in this poem. Very smooth and sincere.

everything's fine.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

8 posted 2001-06-28 05:50 AM

Thank you all for your kind comments. I am totally happy with my wife.

Melton

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2004-09-14 02:06 PM

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06

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Small Town, Somewhere

10 posted 2004-10-27 01:35 PM

Congratulations

And great little rhyme

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

11 posted 2004-10-28 05:33 AM

p s... Thank you for reading.

BWA... Thanks. It has now been 34 yrs and I still feel the same.

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