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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Roses Beautifully Lies on silky cloth of The tiny coffee table that Quietly absorbs my tears, and I Reminisce yonder memories. Yesterday youth figures, Today withered Roses. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very 'pretty' post. Nicely presented. I liked. I be me BUT who does me be? |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
I voted. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks Spirit! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quiet, concise, heartfelt.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, this is sad but know with the sunshine of the afterglow the roses can bloom to life again! (sad sigh) This has my vote, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a quiet reflection... nice... regards, sudhir |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like how your feelings are expressed. You got my vote. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this is sweet Eliza. I voted for you.Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ I think the delicacy of your thoughts are so beautifully expressed~ *huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks all, but I think I will saved this for next round. This thread is still open to replies... ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Diamonte -- and beautifully done. Put this up pleeeease, so Ratleader can vote for a beautifully doubled cinquain? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Aries~ Very much enjoyed. Love the format...Paul This needs to be submitted for the book so I could vote for it. You didn't check the submit box "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (02-28-2003 01:18 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pretty as a picture---in thought and form! ~ May this day be full of joy and laughter! Earth Angel |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: This is a lovely poem, but I hope it does not display the way you are really feeling, as I find it very sad. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks betty, I write this one for a challenge in another forum. But "Goodnight Daddy" is a true story. Thanks for asking. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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