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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Lingeringly... I chasse and pause Fitfully... With soaring umbrellas Swaying... The wind to ease my heat. Careening... In between stems Sliding... Toward the end of the Elevating... Path, I sing a love song...to nature. As I'm wandering, Around the green, I watch the leaves Falling and Intertwining With the wind. Side note: chasse is a ballet movement consisting of one or more quick gliding steps with the same foot always leading. Umbrellas is a metaphor for trees' leaves ~Every girl has a dream within. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-25-2003 06:32 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is really very pretty Eliza. A nice poem. I just don't understand the word chasse. Or perhaps you mean chase? I don't see how you write so beautifully in a language that is not your native tongue. I know I wouldn't be able to. Love, Joyce |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
chasse is a ballet movement consisting of one or more quick gliding steps with the same foot always leading. Thanks for interesting in the poem. ~Every girl has a dream within. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-25-2003 06:19 PM).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Such a pretty poem and I can remember having the wind turn my umbrella inside out, many times when we lived in Seattle. Wind and umbrellas do not always get along! Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
oh betty...I'm talking about the leaves as umberallas..  ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhEliza~ I love your ballet movements through the leaves~ Just perfectly lovely, as is all I've come to read from you~ Your gentle spirit soars with the loveliest word-thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
  Thanks so much Marge. I'm so glad you love this.  ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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