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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
On this blue marbled place You gave me life. I will always know your scent, so sweet Your touch that comforts Your warmth, that heals. If I were blind I would still see you. A women so beautiful, so graceful when you walk. So elegantly dressed. Wherever I travel in my life, You sit beside me Hugging me along the way. When my heart is sad, You cut roses from your garden, Make me smile. When I am hungry, you always provide graciously. Thank you mother for your education. For your teaching me to be , Who I am. Your guidance is love , A lite path that leads me, To appreciate you , To let you know how much I love you.. Wisdom comes with winters. ** Oscar Wilde. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely tribute to your mother who no doubt is worth every word. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (02-25-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
This is a lovely tribute for sure. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lucky Daughter! Lucky Mother!!
Cause to Celebrate. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! This is such a gorgeous tribute to your mom, sweet friend, she truly has passed her golden heart onto you as your love always shines across these pages, yay, God Bless You, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful! ~A hugs and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is such a precious poem, and a beautiful dedication to your Mom. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (02-25-2003 12:38 PM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a very loving tribute... regards, sudhir |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is no mother that would not want to know what you have said in this lovely poem. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As a mom, I would be so proud of my child if he/she wrote this for me....your mom is lucky to have YOU too! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LorenLynn~ I have been negligent in not welcoming you to Passions~ W E L C O M E ! A lovely, lovely write, so tenderly tendered~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We should all cherish our mom as you do... Lovely write... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
An absolutely beautiful dedication to mothers everywhere. Dawn |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
The title got my attention. Really nice post. My mom was the best evr so I know where you are coming from. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful tribute to motherhood. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful tribute... a beautiful poem. *S* |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
it's wonderful to be able to tell your mom how you feel.. |
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