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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Tick-ta, Tick-ta, Alone in my room Listening to the...regular beats. The sky is covered By the black cloth Smoothly spreaded As a roof of the city. There must be two angels At each end of the sky Holding... the cloth Making waves- And the waves would be our clouds Waltzing across in beautiful grace. Each clouds has different shapes, Like the variety people in the ball. But all are imaginative reflection of thoughts. And being one of them, I shall not feel alone anymore. Just when I was in my happiest hour, A bird awake me in her whisper. I'm alone Again... In my room. ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ 'There must be two angels At each end of the sky Holding... the cloth Making waves- And the waves would be our clouds Waltzing across in beautiful grace.' MY GOODNESS .... that is just the loveliest thought~ Stunning imagery dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Is there no end to your beautiful writes - this is a delight. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: I love this one! May be your finest poem yet! You should have put it in the book. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
If anyone would like me to include this one for submittion, please reply to this msg with your email address....so I can inform you if I do post it in Reflection forum. Thanks! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Me found it and cast a great big vote !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks all, but I decided to leave it for next run. |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
I enjoy reading your very nice posts. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are growing better with eah poem. Joyce |
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