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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
0 posted 2003-02-24 09:54 AM


OUTWEIGH

Time has not diminished
The gentler memories
Of a cherished
But long irretrievable
Relationship.

Such recollections
Are likened
To the rosebush,
Where the beauty
Of the blooms
Far outweigh
The thorny barbs.
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-02-24 03:12 PM

SPIRIT:  This is a lovely way to describe a rather "thorny" relationship, where the good that comes of it over shadwos the bad! I really enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
2 posted 2003-02-25 01:45 AM

Thorns?  What thorns?  I don't see any thorns.  Joyce
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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3 posted 2003-03-02 05:45 PM

I like your attitute. This is beautiful, a little sad perhaps, but nice sentiments.

-Lynne

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne
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