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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-02-17 08:30 PM


When I yonder
See your back
Hiding your face,
I slipperily hold back
My footsteps

To...
To stay...
And observe
Your beautiful eyebrows...
And your cherry lips smiles,
While...
I am behind...
The curtain,
Waiting...
With the moon...

Someday...
I know...
I would...
Get to know your name, but...
But can I...
Ever...
Get closer to you
Than just to say hi.

Sometimes...
I think...
It is a dream...
It isn't real love...
I never...
Tell you...
My heartaches...

(So how can you be my sweetheart?)

Yet...
Each time...
When I hear...
(whisper) your voices...
I'm like a puppet...
Pulled by you...

Prehaps...
(Prehaps this is romantic love)

//side note: hehe...I dont' believe in such thing though...isn't it aburd I write this at all..I must have watched too much TV or movie...but then every girl have a dream even if the dream won't become true

Maybe I am not praying...but I know...
You are always listening...to my soul...


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-17-2003 11:14 PM).]

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SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-02-18 12:21 PM


Dreaming or not this is a lovely write, very enjoyable.

I be me BUT who does me be?

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-02-18 10:52 AM


OhLittleEliza~
WHO says they won't come true ?

I'm gonna remember this one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2003-02-18 12:50 PM


Glad I quickly stopped by... ...and I do agree with the others.  My poet friend, "Dreams can come true!!!"  GOD Bless.

-Bob

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4 posted 2003-02-19 05:11 PM


Eliza:  We all dream and sometimes they really happen!  Keep dreaming!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-02-19 11:21 PM


May you always have happy dreams my Eliza  love, Joyce
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6 posted 2003-02-20 12:52 PM


I know how ya feel
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-12-13 07:53 PM



Merry Christmas dear sweet little friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

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