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I cant say goodbye -61 |
akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
Your telling me your going to die Your asking me to say goodbye To not cry a single tear Do you know how terrifed I am I cant live this life with out you I dont want to even try You've been my bset friend for so long You were the one who stood by me When I had no one to turn to Your telling me not to cry Your telling me to say goodbye I cant let you go I know this is hurting you And oh how I wish I could stop the pain You are everything I wish I could be Your the mother I never had No matter what you were always there At my wedding when I had no money You took care of what i couldnt And now I cant believe your telling me That your giving up, that your letting go Why...I know how life has hurt you But dont you see how much I need you This is tearing me apart I never thought my heart could hurt so deeply But it does and I wish I could stop the pain I dont want you to go I cant live with out you Please fight this...dont let it consume you Please dont ask me to say "goodbye" Dont ask me to let you die I cant do that, I cant just stand by I cant stand by and watch you die Please dont you see how much you mean to me ******************************************** Written by akira copyright 2002 Akira |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very heart wrenching poem akira. Knowing that we are losing someone close to us is always more difficult than words can sometimes express. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I know this pain. You have expressed it very well. Joyce |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Perhaps it is the most depress moment of lives when parents leave us. P.S check your grammar, "with out" should be "without", "your" should be "you're". And please don't get offend by my critc. I'm just trying to help proof reading it. Eliza Simmons |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oh akira, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. i really like it Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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