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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2003-01-04 08:05 AM

A hush upon a Winters dawn
as silence deep and quiet still
invades the corners of the earth
and settles in the mind and heart
beating ever softly with
the gentle fall of snow
covering the winters chill
and branches bare of promised Springs
gentle song of births renewed
hope that ever sings the joy
found in the heart this quiet morn
of deepened silent snows remind
to still the thoughts and ponder thus
Gods ever present promised truth
in the still small voice of His
heard in silent Winters dawn.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-01-04 09:36 AM

Very soft and gentle words, like the snow falling outside my window. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-01-04 11:05 AM

Beautiful Ellie. It is always nice to rad you. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-01-04 06:54 PM

ellie: Very lovely! Early morning is a time when it seems you can almost see God watching you!

Betty Lou Hebert

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

4 posted 2003-01-05 07:39 PM

Oh this was lovely
A delightful read
Thanks for this soothing one today

Susan~~~~

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2003-01-06 04:42 AM

Hey Ellie,

this might be a very subtle song, perfect for Christmas!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2003-01-06 08:38 PM

Beautiful as always, Ellie!

cupcake
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 116

7 posted 2003-02-12 10:01 PM

You write so beautifully.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

8 posted 2003-02-13 04:06 PM

good write... especially liked this

"branches bare of promised Springs
gentle song of births renewed"

wish i'd said that...

but spring will come... it will!

thanks

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-02-20 01:03 PM

very soft and relaxing

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-03-20 02:32 PM

Ellie~
Bumped for the sheer beauty of it all~
I'm glad I flipped back a few pages for this lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

11 posted 2003-03-20 07:01 PM

Ellie-

You always paint such a beautiful picture in my minds eye.....

Ranea

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