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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-12-07 09:44 PM







~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-12-07 09:49 PM


Dear Marge:  Gorgeous poem and picture. I've noticed when the wavelets come in on the beach, it does sound as if they are saying "shush".  Guess all oceans sound the same under certain conditions?  I've only seen the Pacific.

Betty Lou Hebert

Betty
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2 posted 2002-12-07 10:06 PM


Oh Marge this is so beautiful. The picture is wonderful too. It makes me so homesick for the water.
Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2002-12-07 10:09 PM


Marge~ Captivating words and thoughts in this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing...Paul
DeeJuneBug
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4 posted 2002-12-07 10:11 PM


Too Much!!! Just when I think you can't get any better...you get better! This is one of your 'speechless' poems that leaves my mind in Ahhhhhhh's with no words to match the words you've created with your truly gifted poets pen...beautiful...really, truly breathtakingly beautiful!

*Trillium...thank you for your little 'thought'...I had never noticed the 'connection' of little waves with sounds of 'shush' upon the shore...but I will now Ü

*Happiness* Loves Company too *Ü*

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-12-07 10:51 PM


Oh Marge, I love this picture and poem. This is just beautiful.
Magicmystery
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6 posted 2002-12-08 01:53 AM


Wonderfully scripted sunset!!! your words painted a more vivid picture of the events than that of the visual candy of the photo.

Sherry

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7 posted 2002-12-08 09:47 AM


I would like to walk into your picture, to the tune of your lovely words.  Joyce
cherrylips
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8 posted 2002-12-08 10:02 AM


A picture perfect poem which I really enjoyed. I have to admit this made me really homesick as I live on the coast and even though british weather is awful I have to admit I cant wit to go for a nice long walk along the beach now. Thanx , dx
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-12-08 11:38 AM


Marge,
So you can fly, beautiful.

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10 posted 2002-12-08 02:45 PM


Marge, how much I would love to walk the beach today and just listen.

This is so perfect my friend.

Huggles, Marti

'A witty saying proves nothing.'
Voltaire (1694-1778)

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11 posted 2002-12-09 06:42 AM


lovely....your words are magic.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



vlraynes
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12 posted 2002-12-29 02:58 PM



Marge~
So beautiful, my friend.
I LOVE this one.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-09-14 01:39 PM


yes
Isobel
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14 posted 2004-09-27 06:44 AM


Dear Marge

A lovely poem accompanied by a beautiful picture.

Love Isobel ox


dgvarner
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15 posted 2004-10-11 10:22 AM


Love this!  
and what a beautiful picture too!

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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