Corner Pub #2 |
Eternal Wildflower |
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
The sixth in the wildflower series ____________________________________________________ What beauty this my eyes behold in field of blue to me unfold with subtle wink in dazzling light beautious form, my heart’s delight dewdrops dance on beckoning spray about thy crown the swallows play none rare as thee in all the land thy scent a symphony quite grand speak now to me in softest tone I am thine own, yes, thine alone this place forever etched in time invades this heart with love sublime embrace me now, oh precious flower and soothe this soul till final hour in bed of earth to lie with thee enjoined by love eternally. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Another beautiful poem. Joyce |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is so lyrical and flowing. I get a great sense of everything you describe. Thanks for this one. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, breathtaking! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Exquisitely lovely and romantic...your analogies of a wildflower and lovers are a treasure to behold! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome piece!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh breathtaking indeed Maree |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What can I do but sigh? What a lucky wildflower to have found the love of such a poet! To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
I loved reading this one yet again, what a pleasent surprise, as always. WO Wordancer, the one who dances with words. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Beautifully done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah lovely as always Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
as a lover of nature, I was truly drawn to this one. Dennis |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Now I must find the other five to enjoy as much as I did this one.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
your talent blossomed brightly with this one, beautiful poem. "across the unfair divide |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is written so well! I read it once and then once more! (Is this the Cagman's sensitive side? LOL!) But seriously, your talent is amazing! I'm glad I found this one! Debbie |
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