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Morning Sings Me |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Morning Sings Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Morning sings me ... then it flings me into waves of wide-awake All God's creatures breathing notes of gentle morning quake~ Red robin on the woodpile at the edge of the forest in song Squirrels in chattered scamper invite me to come along~ Tiny tufts on wings-in-fluff bid me pass their way In cacophony of symphony they orchestrate my day~ Joyous emote on morning note awakens me in sing-a-long tune Richly blessed am I to awaken each morn so soon~ This dawning of nature-in-rise blinks the sleepy from my eyes All of the rapture that morning brings catches me in fling of sing~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This dawning of nature-in-rise blinks the sleepy from my eyes All of the rapture that morning brings catches me in fling of sing~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful gift of more song. Enjoyed! Deb |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
"Sleepies in my eyes Sun is shining all around Beautiful morning" Well, seems we both love morning! This is your usual stunning poem dear lady. Love the graphic too! I'm still waiting for an email .... Huggles to you and little Delaney. Marti |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The most beautiful time of day! Very beautifully done, Marge! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is simply splendid Marge. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful picture and poem, Marge. You are so talented. And a wonderful poetess. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I love this poem! I get up at 5:00 a.m. every morning, (although I sometimes do go back to bed for awhile) and in the spring and summer, this is what that time of morning is like. You have captured it perfectly! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I absolutely love this poem, Marge Thanks for writing about my little piece of the world ~ loving chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So lovely. You have your own way of seeing the beauties of this world. Love, Joyce |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge this is beautiful & again you have captured the feel of a awakening day. Love you, Betty |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is a morning song beyond compare! I want to slip into the picture and experience all the joys of nature of which you so richly sang! Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriends~ I thank you all for the encouraging kindness of your sweet replies~ Is it a great day to be a poetess, oh what ? YEAH ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ Ah yes...this is 'Classic Marge' and I absolutely love it. This is definately one of my favorites from you. Smiling BIG here. Love ya, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-22-2002 01:30 AM).] |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Marge,I guess I never thought of this before; there must be a difference between waking up in the city and waking up in the country.It sounds as if you live in the latter.I remember how nice it used to be to wake up to the soft sounds of nature and you put it so nicely here.Hate to say it,but I'm not much of a morning person now...must be the city craziness.It was nice to wake up to this this morning,though. Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Marge .... up with the birds and all of nature on the rise of early dawn ... you've captured this beautifully. Wonderful flow and internal rhymes, very much enjoyed this morning treasure! Best wishes, /Kit |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Nice song! Eliza Simmons |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Marge, This is so sweet! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, sweet friend, I found you. This is so sweet. I love the morning, too. God made such a beautiful world, with all His creatures, didn't He? Thanks, Marge, for sharing your beautiful poetry with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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