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Shadow Puppets

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-11-15 11:03 PM

Banished on
the shore
of the forlorn
We took our
cue from Icarus
& redirected
the flow
of destiny
going through
the motions
of discovery
the flame
disregards
our faith
& the ground
still comes
as a surprise

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-11-16 11:33 AM

BRAVO!!
This is outstanding! I love that ending...even with the implications.
My library is about to burst, but I am so glad to be able to add this one to it, THANKS!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-11-16 05:13 PM

Sounds as though you had a bumpy flight but it was a learning process. Very nice work. Joyce

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2002-11-16 08:45 PM

Well done, indeed! Excellent expression, K!

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