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Deer Trails(haiku)

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2001-06-11 09:02 AM

sleek silhouette tensed
sensitive nose tests the wind
for danger’s scent-

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-06-11 11:03 AM

Picturesque, and quite cautious. Nice.
Melton

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-11 07:00 PM

I REALLY liked this one. I am in awe at how you come up with these genius filled pieces.
I loved it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-06-11 09:01 PM

Very nice. Joyce

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

4 posted 2001-06-12 11:20 PM

I too like this visual, but deer are not always so ready to bolt. Three nights ago, as i walked through the woods near my home, a deer that i could not quite lay my eyes on began to snort at me. I was apparently too close and was being asked to leave. I did.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

5 posted 2001-06-13 08:37 PM

Ahhh..Red_Feather..had to be a large buck with a sizeable rack to be so bold..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-06-24 01:08 PM

sometimes i feel like that deer..

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2001-06-24 05:58 PM

Good description of a deer poised for flight!

Betty Lou Hebert

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