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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Candles Circled ~*Marge Tindal*~  Candling Cradled cadence 'Cross chasms chiming Concentrically circled Countenance comforting Casting clairvoyant Colors cascading Candling ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Well, hon, talk about a brilliant, complex tongue twister! Phew! Stay away from drafty windows and keep the flame burning. Huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree, it's lovely, and quite an enchanting tongue twister. Enjoyed. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
That's quite a candle you have there Marge dear. Joyce |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is cute. Love ya, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Don't know how you come up with something new and different, so often! This is brilliant! Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
completely captivating.........  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wowwweee Marge, this is incredible, you're incredible! I'm truly truly pleasantly surprised at the vast choice of words that starts with a C...and all that's in your poem's intriguing and surreal! This is truly great! Love, Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Your poem is both captivating and mesmerizing...just like a flame. Enjoyed! Deb |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Marge, and as Deb says, mesmerizing! |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I surely learn a lot of vocabulary from you today! so cleverly written.Eliza Simmons |
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Butterfly New Member
since 2002-11-04
Posts 5Ontario, Canada |
Dear Marge, This is a gift and a sign of healing. Was talking to a friend last night and she use to be terrified of candles, could not stand to see them, let alone burn them. She has now become addicted to them. She says she has all shapes and sizes and many holders. It truly is a miracle. Love Always, Butterfly |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cleverly Captivating Carefree Creativity Caresses Canvas Candescent Candlelight Captured Complete Contentment Conveyed Marge~ I love when you start playing with words like this. Makes me smile. Love and hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-15-2002 12:38 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all so much~ It's a creative comfort to me to 'play' with words~ VICKY ... me WUB U ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I dance beyond the circle, of candling in gentle recall Back to a time, a long ago time when loved ones stood so tall~ I see them dance in silhouette across my chasmed memory Reaching out ...... touching a place deep inside of me~ *Thank you all for your gentle replies~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-24-2003 12:50 PM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Creative, captivating, charismatic - a candle carnival. Loved this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleSPIRIT~ Love your 'candle carnival'~ We got a canuba thing going on here~  Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, only you can write such a beautiful write, only you... moons, circles, words and forms... your talent knows no bounds... glad to have read you... regards, sudhir |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Wow, brillant!   ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
Greetings. It's been quite awhile for me to be back here again. I couldn't get my old name to work, so I took out the spaces and created this name. Coming back, this poem was a great first read for me. Well done. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Sudhir, Eliza and welcome back BrokenWingedAngel ... glad to have been your first read back .... come again~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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