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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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A pale curtain of grey covers today seen through constant haze is life now saturated, in deeper color the floor arrayed, with wet collect upon leaves lush and rich. It is the hour of day, to bring such gray, added to by the overcast of cloud blocking sun from ground placing what can be seen by mere glance, through foggy window pane, in shroud. Gauzy cover over all to soften the world of harsh, lighten the real of the reality, ever so gently, I see the lightened, pale of day. WhiteRose 11/11/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The days are pale indeed but we know the bright sun is only covered with clouds that will pass away. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nicely done, WhiteRose! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Joyce for your kind words.  Denise, thanks so much for reading and responding. It is appreciated. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ Come see us again ... bring a friend~ Your poetic thoughts are sooooo well penned~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
WhiteRose: This is a lovely, descriptive piece! Betty Lou |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed the imagery here and the feeling too..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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