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Denise

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0 posted 2002-11-09 07:49 PM

Your finely crafted verses play a tune
And splash across the canvas of my mind
A picturesque fair wood or sandy dune
I’ve seen the world through phrases you’ve designed.

Your pen has caused my tears to freely flow
Cascading falls from sorrows that you share
And wisdom gleaned, on me, you do bestow
You gift my soul because you truly care.

A healing balm I’ve found in clever wit
My burdened heart set free once more to fly
Aloft again in ever graceful flit
Your gentle words, the breeze that lifts me high.

A symphony you softly play for me
Upon the page when you write poetry.

1/9/2000

No new inspiration as of yet so here is one of my "oldies"

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-09 09:06 PM

Ah Denise, there are no oldies
from your pen
Just reinspires
to smile us again...

Marge Tindal

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2 posted 2002-11-09 09:09 PM

Denise~
Lady ... a verse from you is a Symphony In D-enise Minor~
Beautifully played sweet friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise

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3 posted 2002-11-10 01:41 PM

Thank you muchly, girls! Glad you enjoyed the reinspire!

Trillium

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4 posted 2002-11-10 10:44 PM

Denise: I'm so glad you re-posted this as I had never read it before and it is full of beautiful sentiments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

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5 posted 2002-11-11 12:50 PM

I had not seen this before and I understand it. I have just been reading all of the poetry that was posted in just a week that I have not been able to be here. All different and all wonderful. Love, Joyce

Denise

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6 posted 2002-11-11 09:40 AM

Why thank you girls! Glad you enjoyed it!

WhiteRose
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7 posted 2002-11-11 07:54 PM

This is simply lovely. Truly splendid verse. Enjoyed.

Denise

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8 posted 2002-11-13 01:16 PM

Thank you WhiteRose! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2002-11-13 08:51 PM

Denise, this is new and fresh to me and I so enjoyed reading it.

You are one fabulous writer.

Huggles, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP."
Louisa May Alcott

Denise

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10 posted 2002-11-14 07:25 PM

Thanks so much, Marti! I'm glad you liked it!

Kit McCallum

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11 posted 2002-11-14 07:46 PM

Denise, it's so lovely to read you again. This has such a beautiful flow, and the phrasing is delightful ... filled with inspire. I really enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Denise

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12 posted 2002-11-16 05:47 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Kit! Thanks for stopping by!

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