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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wonderful. That is all I can say in response to this piece. Luv, Liz. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful. Love, Betty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margie, May I keep it? It's a  and I think one of my very favorites. Hugggsss |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is sooooo beautiful. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh my Margie girl, this is a tear jerker. You have quite a way with words! Deb  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, I thank you all sooooo much~ I am so pleased with this piece~ I awoke in the night ... leaned against the window and as my breath left a mist, it all came to me~ I just couldn't wait to get up this morning and find the perfect graphic to go with the thoughts~ I am just tickled to pieces that you like it too~  LittleLizzie~ I can't begin to tell you how wonderful it was to see your reply waiting for me on this~ I have soooooooo missed you and thank the Good Lord that you have come my way again~ I love you !  Betty~ Thank you so much, love~ GentleSpirit~ Just knowing you want to KEEP it makes me a happy poetess !! Bless you my friend~ SweetSuzieQ~ Thank you dear lady~ I'm gonna get that e-mail answered ! Honest Injun ! BloomingRose~ Simultaneous replies in flight we were~ Thank you pretty gal ... I'm always pleased to know you are out there~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (11-08-2002 03:58 PM).] |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
From such a simple thing that we've all done, you've created something so lovely. Very melancholy and moving...loved it. Julie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a masterpiece, Marge! Very well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Again,Marge,this is beautiful...and one that I very much relate to.If this is a testimony of truth,I commiserate.If Love is True,it never dies...and the one you love is always there within. Geoffrey |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-sis Very touched by this one.  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart, yet again this is perfect, you know I love this utterly utterly, as always the flow of line is exquisite it really is. This really is an excellent piece from you darling heart I love it utterly utterly, This is so truly you wonderful. This hangs in the air like a note in a aria from Les Miserables, truly exquisite, as I said NO ONE does it like you. Somewhere in time there waits a sigh Waiting softly for its last goodbye The heart that sits and watches silently Wishes for a vision with some clarity But while heart’s memory lingers on There’s no chance of hearing love’s sweet song The memory keeps you locked inside And your heart seeks a place to hide Open your soul let the memory fade And you’ll walk in sunshine not in shade   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You certainly found the perfect graphic to go with your marvelous poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Your words were so sad yet filled with so much beauty. I felt as if I was part of the picture. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, it would be extremely difficult for me to pick a favorite piece that you have written. But girlfriend, IF I had to choose, this would be the one. The words, the graphic ~~ just incredible. Loves to you, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge, this is so sooo beautiful penned, thank you for sharing dear friend. (((hugs))) Charisma |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
The words are written with the pen, but the love comes from within. Thanks, Melton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Exquisite. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ I appreciate the read and reply~ It was just a 'moment-in-time' that poets luck into~ Denise~ Awwwww ... thanks lady~ Seymour~ I so appreciate you~ StreetHeart~ I'm sure we've all had those 'moments' when it might have been a 'happening' ... happily for me ... it was perhaps written on windows of a distant past~ Thank you so much for your kind and considerate comments~ Martie~ Hon ... I would imagine that at one time or another we have both breathed a *sigh* upon the windowpane ... (or pain)~ *Hugs* MarshaLove~ Not only do you leave a beautiful reply ... but a piece of your poetic heart too~ Thank you dear girl~ BettyLou~ Thank you for thinking so .... I adore sharing with you~ SueTang~ It's a real compliment when a poet learns she may have pulled the reader into the picture~ Thank you so much for letting me know~ MartiGal~ I would always hope that my 'next' one would be your 'favorite'~  You are just a sweetheart~ Charisma~ I am always pleased to see you've flipped a page of me~ Thank you dear lady~ Melton~ Thanks so much for your kind thoughts~ Joyce~ Great appreciation from this little corner of the world for YOU~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ This is absolutely gorgeous and such a heart-tugger of a write. This reached in and grabbed and just wouldn't let go. Perfectly penned and presented, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear, dear Marge, this is so mesmeric but yet leaves me feeling a little wistful...and I must say its such a surreal feeling! This is one of a kind Marge, I love it~ Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VickyMyLilBuddy~ Just seeing the lovely comments you've left all over my ink has given me that 'you-know' feeling~ Me missum our all-nighters soooooo much~ Thank you sweetie ... you're still #1 ! MidnightBlues~ You leave the loveliest replies ... I am so very pleased that you enjoy my 'word-doodles' that much~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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