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Pristine Waters Flowing |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Pristine Waters Flowing ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() There's a land I've heard of where the pristine waters flow The place of my contentment where my ancestral Spirit goes~ It's a trip into the soul of me that I need to often touch The Spirits call out my name for they need to tell so much~ And within my questing come the voices of the past Peace ... peace they say it will come at last~ The Rainbow Warriors are coming get ready for the day When all the greed of the past will be forgiven away~ This is the time for seeking peace tomorrow will be too late Come join hands across this land Tomorrow will not wait~ *My thanks to my Bill for the inspiration* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am extending my hand in peace and I am adding this poem to my library. I can feel the primal beat of your words. Very stirring! Linda |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty Marge. Love you, Betty |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is so stirring and moving! Just a wonderful poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... The Rainbow Warriors are coming get ready for the day When all the greed of the past will be forgiven away~ This is the time for seeking peace tomorrow will be too late Come join hands across this land Tomorrow will not wait~ ...' This whole poem is so touching and rips at my heart, but the last two stanza's go beyond my vocabulary of words. 'Tomorrow will not wait~' gosh what truth lies in this sentence. This may have been inspired by your Bill, but I can see the hand of SkyeLara in this also. Hugs my spirit friend, Marti |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthAngel~ Ooooh, thank you so very, very much~ BettyMyFriend~ I can always count on you to 'see' the all of me~ Thank you~ BettyLou~ Such a lovely thing to say .. you know I thank you so much~ MartiGirl~ You are exactly right~ Bill inspired it with questioning me about 'pristine' ... I turned it over to SkyeLara .... Bill and I were just discussing how she comes and *gifts* me~ I am so blessed~ Thank you, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge I could feel the strength of your pride through each and every verse. Simply breathtaking! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSue~ Thank you for letting me know it 'touched' you with my spirit~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marge, I understand your reasons for staying here in the corner pub, but know the rest of the surfers would really enjoy this peaceful ride. Of course, they know how to read in here too! ![]() Thanks for such lovely words. Why aren't you on the ballot????? I'd vote for you. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidniteSun~ Thank you so very, very much for the sweet reply~ I write to share the thoughtful *gifts* from many muses~ I can soooooooo appreciate this beautiful place to share with all~ Running for election ??? Moi ??? LOL ... ![]() Me thinks my credentials wouldn't stand the scrutiny ... 'fraid I'm too - too conservative~ (as in 'old-fashioned' prim n' proper) ![]() Love n' chuckles~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
A truly lovely poem. Wonderful expressive lines ...It's a trip into the soul of me that I need to often touch. Love that one (^_~) Julie |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I expecially like the first half of the poem ![]() Eliza Simmons |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is a beautiful picture. And, the poem is just as beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ Thank you soooo much ... SkyeLara *gifts* me with little beauties to warm the hearts of many~ Eliza~ Thank you dear one. SweetSuzieQ~ Thanks hon ... sorry it took soooooo long for me to come in here and find time to thank everyone~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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