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leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-10-27 06:32 PM

easy analogy
you don't understand
easy way out
you took the long way
easy so easy for me to complete
compete with the words
at the edge of your seat
a thriller, young playwright
first movie enthralls
the watcher the waiter
audience balls
fists become hands
as they breathe out a sigh
the hero is safe
the killer dies
easy analogy
but you don't want to see
your life is a lie
on a movie screen

[This message has been edited by leafseranade (10-27-2002 07:18 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-10-27 07:34 PM

Too bad. Real life can be more wonderful than any movie story. But mny would rather live lie. Very nice. Joyce

Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

2 posted 2002-11-01 02:31 PM

I really liked this;the flow,the phrasing,and especially the subject matter.It's nice to read about something different for a change,other than the holiday or the season.A "keeper" for me.

Geoff

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-08-26 11:24 PM

Great write, gives us dreamers somthing to think about.

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-27 01:34 PM

I also think this is a really neat and original poem.. great job

I enjoyed it a lot..

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2003-08-29 12:29 PM

This was worth the reading a second time. Joyce

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