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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-10-24 06:05 PM





~*This one is dedicated to my Aussie friend, Kethry*~
~She epitomizes what true friendship is all about~
(Okay ... so she makes me laugh too !)


Re*fract"ed, (2). Turned from a direct course by refraction as, refracted rays of light.


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 2002-10-24 06:07 PM


this is lovely and sweet I love it!

Eliza Simmons
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Betty
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2 posted 2002-10-24 06:37 PM


This is so pretty.
Love ya,
Betty

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3 posted 2002-10-24 06:37 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul this is utterly utterly wonderful and yes she is incredibly special, one of the beautiful souls who illume our lives with their light.

Just as you do, someone who is not just a loving heart but an excellent writer, me wubs you very much.

And I love this utterly utterly utterly, it sings across my heart as so many of yours do

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

[This message has been edited by Marsha (10-24-2002 06:38 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-10-24 10:07 PM


This is indeed lovely and true, Marge.  Joyce
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5 posted 2002-10-24 10:15 PM


Dear Marge:  Just brilliantly done!!

Betty Lou Hebert

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-10-25 05:21 AM


Marge,
I've been told I was fractious, and fractured and even sometimes refractory (as in obstinate) but refracted is a new one on me...I'ts a good thing right?
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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7 posted 2002-10-25 11:23 AM


Marge, the words and picture shine like the warmth of your heart. Brilliantly done.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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8 posted 2002-10-25 12:01 PM


What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady... I don't think she knows how much light she shares through her fantastic poems and very dear self... but she should. *S*

Great work, Mis' Marge. *S*

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9 posted 2002-10-25 07:27 PM


Marge, this was beautiful, what a wonderful person that person must be.  
SmartChick
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10 posted 2002-10-26 06:35 PM


THIS IS BEAUTIFUL MARGE!
A. L. Becker
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11 posted 2002-10-26 08:47 PM


dear Marge, i truly loved this poem, it is perfectly fitting to my own dear dear friend and i, as well. beautifully done.

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-10-27 01:31 PM


Eliza~
Thank you, dear~

Betty~
I love it when you love it !
Thank you, my friend~

MarshaLove~
You KNOW I always appreciate YOU~
We have YOU to thank for assisting in the 'refracting' of our spirited light~
Thanking you once more, I am~

Joyce~
Thank you for the read and for your enjoyment~

BettyLou~
Awwwww ... I trust you know just how much you are loved and appreciated~

Kethry~
It's a VERY, VERY good thing~
The mere fact that the bend-of-light brought us together is convincing enough for me !
I love you, sweet lady~
I'm going to send you this graphic so you can 'do your own thing' with it ... remember our discussion in Tampa ???
You owe me one !
I miss you sooooooooooooooooooo much~

MartiGal~
I soooooo wish you could have been here to meet her ...

SuthernGal~
AND that goes for you too, lady~
Gosh-darn it ... you'd just love her to pieces too !

Chili~
Indeed she is !
And she came from half-a-world away so we could come to know her 'shy & retiring' self~

SweetSuzieQ~
Thank you hon ... hope your 'boo-boo' is getting better~

Annika~
I am sooooo glad that you've found a friend like this too~
My life is blessed daily by the circling of friends~

Thanks, everyone~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2002-11-30 05:49 PM



Marge~
Well, you've gotta know that I love this one.
Such truth in this write for a friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-11-30 07:55 PM


Vicky~
You've got a heart of gold~
When friendships slide off the pages blue ...
and encircle our hearts with love .... it's a very, very good thing~
Love you~
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2002-12-01 10:30 AM


'Tis lovely, indeed, Marge!
IntoTheRain
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16 posted 2006-01-31 05:15 PM


As an ardent best friend myself, I have to say I enjoyed this.. I love play on imagery, especially dealing with light and color..
midnightblues
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17 posted 2006-02-01 11:27 AM


Hi Marge,

This is lovely and so very wise

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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18 posted 2006-02-14 06:16 PM


I love this.  Love reflected in Love, refracted light, and myraid promises of rainbows to carry us through the storms.  Such is the value of friendship...a beautiful poem for today.

Happy Valentines Day

~ Karen ~

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19 posted 2006-02-15 11:37 AM


I like it, it sticks in the brain, and the presentation graphic reminds me of something I might have seen in early saturday morning in 1979.
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2006-02-19 11:06 AM



How neat to see this one make the trip around again~

Thanks to each of you ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

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