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universityrow New Member
since 2002-09-24
Posts 1 |
It started as a symphonic breeze Two passionate souls being swept away in a whirlwind romance Signs pointing to extraordinary Emotions forecasting love without a path Without direction how could it be? With one harsh a blow, it is gone The storm is over and the damage is done The forecast turns to a love lost in continuous breeze Blowing ever so slightly and not nearly as often Everyday five feet away from the most fantastic storm of their lives |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a nice entree to Passions - You've used a very effective metaphor to mirror the age old emotion of love. Settle in and enjoy some good reading and enjoy your stay with us - It's a great place... Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome to Passions! Exquisite first post! Sometimes that first grand passion turns to love and other times not...but oh the terrible price of the pain and destruction it leaves in it's wake...you penned it beautifully...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Interesting read. Love does have its stormy times. Welcome to PIP Melton |
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CHILI Member
since 2002-09-08
Posts 244 |
Welcome, and I must say I enjoyed this piece. Maybe the perfection lies in the fact that is ended so quickly. Thanks for sharing.  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is an interesting and different way of describing a brief love affair. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
universityrow: Welcome to the site and this is an impressive first post. Very different slant on love, but often happens this way. Betty Lou Hebert |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
welcome Universtyrow..... what a glorious entrance you have made. Can't wait for the next one to come our way. Best |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Wow!This is so powerful! Excellent phrasing. I'm glad I found this.You need to write more. Peace,Geoffrey |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well I like what the once perfect storm blew in here!--You and your poetry! Welcome! And this was a fine debut! Earth Angel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. Your first post is outstanding. I have this feeling you have more blowin in the wind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
UniversityRow~ Welcome to the Corner Pub of Passions~ Excellent metaphoric entry with your first post~ Hope we'll see more of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Universityrow! Great poem! I enjoyed it very much! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this very much, and looking forward to more! Karilea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions. This was a wonderful first post, I am looking forward to more. Enjoy your time here. |
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