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My Special Time |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
I love to soak in a bubble bath, After a long, hard day, I sink right in, up to my chin As my cares are washed away. I lower the blind and lock the door And then I dim the light, I ease myself into the warmth With nobody else in sight. Alone in my own inner sanctum, I find some peace of mind, And fill my head with pleasant thoughts, This is my special time. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-04-2002 12:02 AM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
we all need this special time to collect our thoughts. good job on this piece. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pegasus111---why, thank you! Some of my most creative thoughts come while I'm soaking away the cares of the day. Linda |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes indeed. A pleasant relaxing piece. Joyce. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joyce---Thank you! I am pleased that I was able to convey the mood. Linda |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Earth angel: This sounds heavenly. In my family however, when I decide to take a bubble bath, that's when everyone seems to "need" me to do something!! Even the dog comes and barks at the door! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Trillium---I can sympathize with you! I know exactly what you mean! Thank you for the reply! Linda |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Angel, this sounds like heaven. the last line really works for me, especially after the preceding lines. i wanted to fill up my own bathtub. i cant remember the last time i had a bubble bath. though "cares are washed away" sounds a little cliche, the piece was very effective. Annie :- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
B.L.Becker---you got a chuckle out of me with "Angel, this sounds like heaven." I love my baths! I soak and relax, contemplate and meditate...even if I can't do it until the middle of the night!...I do it everyday! It cleans my inside as well as my outside! Linda |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this one. I find solitude in flying across blue skies. We all need a place to call our own. :-) |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
if i can say anything its that we all need our special time to ourselves this was a nice poem thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This made me want to sink right into a bubble bath myself.... ![]() Very Cute... Best |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
I can't help feeling some kind of emptiness Even when such time is needed - Haze |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Linda, Simple pleasures are magnified in the light of your writing talent ![]() Thanks for sharing this gentle reminder ![]() Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
hehehe *gigglettes** That seems like a good time right about now! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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