Corner Pub #2 |
My Special Time |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love to soak in a bubble bath, After a long, hard day, I sink right in, up to my chin As my cares are washed away. I lower the blind and lock the door And then I dim the light, I ease myself into the warmth With nobody else in sight. Alone in my own inner sanctum, I find some peace of mind, And fill my head with pleasant thoughts, This is my special time. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-04-2002 12:02 AM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
we all need this special time to collect our thoughts. good job on this piece. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pegasus111---why, thank you! Some of my most creative thoughts come while I'm soaking away the cares of the day. Linda |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes indeed. A pleasant relaxing piece. Joyce. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joyce---Thank you! I am pleased that I was able to convey the mood. Linda |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Earth angel: This sounds heavenly. In my family however, when I decide to take a bubble bath, that's when everyone seems to "need" me to do something!! Even the dog comes and barks at the door! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Trillium---I can sympathize with you! I know exactly what you mean! Thank you for the reply! Linda |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Angel, this sounds like heaven. the last line really works for me, especially after the preceding lines. i wanted to fill up my own bathtub. i cant remember the last time i had a bubble bath. though "cares are washed away" sounds a little cliche, the piece was very effective. Annie :- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
B.L.Becker---you got a chuckle out of me with "Angel, this sounds like heaven." I love my baths! I soak and relax, contemplate and meditate...even if I can't do it until the middle of the night!...I do it everyday! It cleans my inside as well as my outside! Linda |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this one. I find solitude in flying across blue skies. We all need a place to call our own. :-) |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
if i can say anything its that we all need our special time to ourselves this was a nice poem thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This made me want to sink right into a bubble bath myself.... Very Cute... Best |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
I can't help feeling some kind of emptiness Even when such time is needed - Haze |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Linda, Simple pleasures are magnified in the light of your writing talent Thanks for sharing this gentle reminder Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
hehehe *gigglettes** That seems like a good time right about now! ARCTIC WIND |
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