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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Hey guys not posted in here for a while so I'll leave you with this. A dream is just a dream, But I dream of you again, Is it really just a dream, Why are things left unsaid, And all the while i'm here, Am I missing something new, You have changed as a person, And I have changed with you. By the way will you guys help me out with a title?  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
great start! I don't know if you plan on adding verses to this, but I definetly would consider ending with "you have changed with a person, and I have changed with you" I like that...it gives a satisfying feeling in the reader. or maybe it's just me, I don't know.  -Kris |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
oh, a title? hmmm. Desired Dreams? That's not a very good suggestion. Sorry. I'm still a bit asleep this morning. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I'll have a think it was just a spur of the moment thing and didnt give myself time to think I think i might choose a title somewhere along those lines tho. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think like the previous reader, that this is a work in progress. and the title will come to you as you finish it. Joyce |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yeah my muse is being to hasty (blame everything on my muse) If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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