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| Open Poetry #8 |
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love waves |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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Soaking in the warmth of your last kiss drowning in the the feeling of your last embrace Love between us flows like water moves like the waves gentle and un-asking then urgent and crashing but never demanding just love washing over every inch of my skin my body and soul from the outside in The pushing of the waves against my heart I instinctly put up my guard but it's too late Your love has pulled me to your distant shore and I don't want to try to swim against the tide of you Take me with you so I can soak myself in the warmth of your kiss and drown you your arms < !signature--> Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes  [This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello Red~ Good to see your smiling face here this morning. 'I don't want to try to swim against the tide of you' I like ... go with the flow ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very sentimental, and very lovely... regards, sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Red, I really like this one you've penned. ~ The pushing of the waves against heart ~ Oh, how the way you've weaved the tides into this just captured my heart. Coco |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
Thank you for the kind words. You guys always encourage me.! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Redwriter, Happy to see a book submission from you!!! This was great. I love the water theme throughtout the poem. You know you have my vote!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
vote? ohhhh.. we vote for the book do we?? mmmm I better dig some more out.. (smile) thanks! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well, Hello stranger!!!!  Good to see you posting again This is a very strong, well written piece. *vote* All my love, Jeffrey |
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