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A move |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Its madness all around Confusion mars the true feelings Love in us is true But trust is no more there Neither in you nor me We need to make a start Either to unite or to move apart Both are equally difficult But something should be done Nothing can destroy the memmories They'll reign supreme in my mind Never again it'll be the same Never again I want it to be Sincerely A_L |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There are such crossroads, where difficult decisions have to be taken...these are the most difficult times... Nice poem, very well expressed in the bare necessary amount of words... beautiful... regards to you amazon_lover, Sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
When the trust is gone what is left...I know how hard this is and you're so right, to move or to stay, each has a set of painful paths the choice can only be made by you. Take care~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi amazon-lover, Wonderful and full of insight and wisdom, so much enjoyed. Cerenity |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
straight from the heart---and I like that total honesty in a person. Hugs for you, the road is long, but a step at a time... Nice work here. Simply, but eloquently expressed. |
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