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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Hold me Hold me in your arms Wrap me tight and don’t let go I want to feel your warmth around me I want this time to pass real slow I want to breath in every part of you Feel your love inside my soul Melt as you caress me Forever warm and never cold Holding on tighter as time goes by Hoping so much we won’t have to part As a tear makes it’s way down on my cheek Just as reality starts breaking my heart Closing my eyes to this ecstasy I squeeze you tighter in hopes of holding on But the time keeps on ticking away And before too long my love, you’ll be gone With tears in my eyes I trace your lips with my finger Reaching to kiss you Wanting so much for this time to linger I love you my love Please hold me as tight as you can Whispering, I’ll forever hold you with me My love Our time has come to an end |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
le beau ideal, well set. Time has ended and therefore love? Love has ended and therefore time? Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Prometheus the hardest thing to do is letting go of someone you love. The time together may end but the love remains. Thanks for taking the time to respond.  kat |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Kat~ Beautiful emotions in this piece. I understand all too well how hard it is to let go of somehow you love, and your poem expressed it perfectly, bittersweetly and beautifully. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I love you my love Please hold me as tight as you can Whispering, I’ll forever hold you with me My love Our time has come to an end ..... Goodbye my love, for the time to depart has come, Take care, my soul, for, within me I will hold, forever the love that I feel for you... Great sentiments... nice poetry... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hold me in your arms Wrap me tight and don’t let go I want to feel your warmth around me I want this time to pass real slow I want to breath in every part of you Feel your love inside my soul Melt as you caress me Forever warm and never cold ------------- WOW I LOVE this poems intensity... i could feel you holding your breath to try to make time stand still. excellent expression of emotion here kat... i related so much to both the words and the ache. I'll never get good at letting go. *smile* thank you so very much for your very beautiful reply to my poem...I was touched by your words...since you have not posted an Email addy I will thank you here. take care, jm baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I also know how hard it is to let go. I have gone through the torment that comes after the separation. It lingers a long long time and I'm not sure I'm over it even yet, I've just become better equipped to deal with the loss. Very nice work well said! |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
kat~ Simly beautiful, my friend. I know how hard it is to love someone, and to hold on as tightly as you can, but to know that you can't hold on forever. There is no pain to compare. But I have found this solace -- as long as I hurt, I FEEL. And as long as I feel, I live. Very well done, my friend! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know Kat...they may be physically gone but they live on in our heart...and when we feel the pain and sorrow and the caring and the happiness we feel close to them....James |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Melissa: It's a shame that we ever have to let go of people we love. Thank-you and I'm glad you liked it. Sudhir: When we part from someone we love we forever hold the love we have for them inside our soul. Thanks Janet: Thank-you so much for your compliments and I don't think anyone is ever good at letting go of someone they love. I'm happy that when you read it, you felt some of what I was feeling when I wrote it. Janet in comparison to your poem, mine doesn't even come close as far as emotions are concerned. Thanks, but you really didn't have to thank me. I meant every word of it. Warm wishes go out to you. ethome: That's part of the problem. Seperation with any loved one lingers for a very very long time. The hurt is so great. We try to deal with it but it's still so difficult. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Terry: You're right, there is no pain to compare. As far as feeling, I agree with you even with pain you feel but I think I'd rather take the feeling of joy and have a little less pain to deal with. I think everyone could do with a little less hurt in their lives. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. James: They will always live in our hearts. I agree. We do feel close to them but at the same time we yearn for them. Thanks kat |
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