Amidst these blue skies....

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Open Poetry #8

Amidst these blue skies....

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-26 10:43 PM

innocence

still flashing
behind my eyes

duller now
almost gone now...

but when I knew you

my eyes were
the sky
trapped in
two circles

begging to
taste the entire world
and your lips
in one swoop

my arms were passion
encased in
pale skin
begging to be
glorified
by your fingertips

by your stormy embrace

it is true
that
I loved you

and that you dropped it
on the floor
with
clumsy hands

shattered

and you forgot to
clean it up

but I don't cry
anymore

I am simply still

waiting for your
beautiful storm
to
claim me

amidst these
blue skies

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-06-26 10:46 PM

Interesting imagery,,, blue skies. stormy,,, these together make me think of unexpected emotions

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-06-27 11:23 AM

Hi Jennie,

This is great, I enjoyed it very much, thank you for sharing. Also welcome to passions I think you are going to like it here.

Cerenity

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-06-27 11:30 AM

Amazing how each new scar on our heart takes away also the innocence needed to believe in this ruthless world. Hold on tight, storms never last forever they have their season as well. Loved the imagination and the vision it creates.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-06-28 10:41 AM

beautiful sentimental poetry...written with a heart's pure simplicity...

I am simply still

waiting for your
beautiful storm
to
claim me

amidst these
blue skies

...

lovely images you have woven here, jennie may

This is the first of yours I have read...so its time for me to say WELCOME TO PASSIONS and ENJOY your stay here

My regards,
Sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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