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Love Lost?
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Love Lost? |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
She said my love, don't give up! We can make it, just wait and see It will work out, if we don't give up Yes it will if its meant to be Fates cruel hand, lands a crushing blow Between your heart and mine Trying so hard to make you know The problems not yours , but mine Yes my love , we made a date In our love we would revel I would be with my Soul Mate If not for that blasted DEVIL He toys with our hearts, and our minds Doing his evil do Piercing our souls with his tines To sever my love for you But what he does not understand Is my love for you is true Not even by divine command Would my love be vanquished for you As time goes by, I let out a sigh For the life we could have led No so long, no see ya, not even goodbye Those words shall not be said Forever more I will Love You Dear From now to eternity For every second , I shed a tear For the Love that could not be |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful but so sad. this one had such a painful longing in it, left my own heart aching for you. excellent emotion from your heart! take care amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
True love never dies That kind of love is always there When two soul mates find eachother They're with eachother everywhere For even when they're apart There's a connection like no other And no matter what is thrown in front of them They will always find eachother For I found my Soul Mate in my lifetime and he's always here with me I may not be able to see him all the time But I feel his loving arms caressing me For I love you my Soul Mate with all my heart I love you, I always will And no matter how much time we spend apart For all eternity, I'll love you still Dakota, this was so beautiful and sad it made me shed more then just one tear. It's so emotional for me. Thanks for writing it. kat |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I feel your pain in your words...which I suppose is as it should be. |
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star216 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 11 |
Good poem but sad at the same time. Very dramatic. Eager to read more of your work. |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Thank you Amy. Kat, as always your reply is that of a poet's heart. Nothing is more heart breaking than to not be with your Soulmate. Prometheus, Yes you felt what I felt when I wrote it... Thank You. Thank You Star, Sadness is part of life , always there, if it wasn't , we could not know Happiness.... Thanks again for all your replies everyone! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The anguish is felt in every word. You have touched the roots of my heart and I wish for you the happiness greater than this pain. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Dakota~ Your piece is so pain filled and sorrowful as lost love often inspires, may you find peace and healing through your writing. My thanks to you for sharing this slice of your heart~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Well Dakota I confess I read this and tears flow down my cheeks. Such expression of love so eloquently written touches my heart. ~ Not even by devine command would my love be vanquished to you ~ this verse is quite profound. Coco |
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