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Why Should I ? |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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This is a song I have been working on.....songs are an avenue I have been interested in persuing for some time.....any HONEST feed back would be appreciated....It is sort of a rockin country tune... Why should I tell you what I long to say? what difference will it make in the end? why should I try to stop you from leaving? When all you really need is to just get away.... away from the heartache confusion and mistrust.... away from me darling alone with your thoughts... you will see then that your better off without me you will see then that all you needed was space.... space to heal the heartache space to let go... I know you still love me I know it's hard to let go let go of a love that you've had for many years but in time all the tears will dry..... so why should I tell you what I long to say? why should I try to stop you from leaving? Why should I cry all through the night? What difference will it make in the long run? lying beside you I feel your heart beat... it is one of the many things about you I will miss... still I know you love me after all I have done... your heart in mine I know we were one.... You tell me to tell you all that i feel tell me..... why should I? why should I tell you of all the pain in my heart? why should I tell you oh how much I regret? Why should I tell you I don't want you to leave? will it make a differnce between you and me? (repeat first chorus) Fade out.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well I dont know nothing about writing song lyrics but i know i like this ones words and emotions...much!! just be glad ya cant hear me singing...  its like cat scratch fever lol great writing JA jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Julie ahemmm darn you caught me...i was singing  god that soundedawful but this poem err song was wonderful! i really liked the words to this and put to music i am sure it would be beautiful! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Very good Julie. . . humming some tune in my head. . . now if I only could write it down!! I'm sure that you'll be able to find someone to help you with this. . . excellent!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Get George Jones to sing it and you may have a hit....( i sat and sang it to the tune of "if drinkin don't kill me)... |
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