Open Poetry #8 |
Hazy |
douglasbailey Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27Palmerston North, New Zealand |
I’m tryin’ ta write a poem But I can not get it flowin’ The thoughts are in my head But I can not get them said Thinkin’ bout my baby Is making me all hazy And I wish this stupid rhyming would stop Before my head goes… RAAAAAAA! Douglas |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Douglasbailey, Well not a bad start, maybe you could write about how your head go's !!!!!!!! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well, now I know the beginning.. let us know how your head comes out? Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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douglasbailey Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27Palmerston North, New Zealand |
Before my head goes pop! (The poem I was trying to write eventually turned into a letter.) RAAAAAAA! Douglas |
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