Open Poetry #8 |
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babyblue Junior Member
since 1999-09-16
Posts 12 |
The hurt in love can be so deep, depper then the disease that kills you The pain in feeling can make you weep, even if you can't fall asleep. Can you hear my pitiful cry, what if i said i was going to die? would you respond to me then, Or should i write it all in pen? Ink is something that has been lost, For the world has become total caos. No need for a pencil full or lead, If you can type the words from your head. Please respond if this message is clear, For all I live is only a year. Illness form Ads is ashaming, but all they are doing is the naming. They called me a slut, they said i was a hore. All i got is another closed door, In life I hope for only one thing, To tell the one I love it wasen't just a fling The only hope I have is the hope I've lost. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I heard you babyblue...and I do respond,,,and somehow I just think you need to know that someone is here. listening if ya need an ear...love to you... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I hear you too and offer a hand of support, a shoulder to lean and a heart that cares for your well being. Take pride in your heart and remember there is an Angel beside you each and every day. Coco |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi BB I guess love will stand anything on its way if its true and fearless. Trust is what is required..take care. Sincerely A_L |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Babyblue, you only need say whats in your heart and everyone will listen here, with frienship and support. your friend, Olias |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Well, This is truly a heart felt one. I can almost feel your grief and pain. I once was also taken by pain, not shurly like yours but pain indeed, so great that killing myself wasnt out of the question. We were put on earth for reasons that we wont understand, but you being here and writing that poem has touched my life, and all the others who read it. My heart cries out for you, and I send my hugs your way. LarBear |
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