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Soulmate (Poem #2) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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I posted my first 'soulmate' poem entitled "Soulmate Of My Heart" and this is the sequel to it. My friend Sheri is getting married and I will give this to her in the wedding card. Is it good enough? *For Sheri-Lyn and Cedric on their wedding day* ~August 5, 2000~ ~SOULMATE~ God created you out of the depths of my soul, out of the desires of my heart, and out of the purity of my tears, for, even before I breathed my first breath of life, you were meant to be mine, and, I, yours forevermore, two bodies of angels, sharing one soul, a match made in heaven *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful Melissa, can you write anything wrong? I think not, a touching tribute, truely beautiful. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, I think it is perfect!!! Wonderful!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, it's perfect, just like the poet who created it. . . Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Melissa, Oh hon this is PERFECT!! Absolutely beautiful and creative just like the poet who wrote it! Take care sweets. Amy < !signature-->"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
totally pretty, it reminds me of giving birth also. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I guess I must not be used to compliments, I am floored by all your replies, THANK YOU SO MUCH! And, Redheart Angrybraids, I like your standpoint of how my poem could also be about the bond between mother and child as kindred spirits, thanks for the reply |
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