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Deep in My Dreams
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Deep in My Dreams |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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too much too little too soon too late can't erase the heartache can't place the blame can't undo what has been done can't even tell you why can't understand what happened between you and I pondering every moment trying to make sense of a love so intense over and over in my head all those hurtful words we said differences clashing like the tide against the shore rushing in unnoticed always wanting more a love so strong yet so wrong passions flame a lovers game a wall we couldn't climb our loves destruction was a crime your hand in mine we were looking for a sign something to show us it was real someone to tell us how we should feel a real love should come easy without struggle or fight connected unbroken tightly sealed at the seams a true love only exists deep in my dreams..... Julie :) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice expression and presentation  Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Julie- almost missed this one due to a busy weekend. Glad I caught it. "our loves destruction was a crime" powerful words. The whole piece absolutely wonderful. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ 'a real love should come easy' It comes easy ... it just leaves real hard ! Well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow...this is great..so expressive and i like the way it builds and builds up in its intesity of emotions... very well written JA. so many great lines... so many hard questions ... love makes us work for the answers sometimes take care jm baby dont you work so hard for this prize you've found, it will all be gone-when you turn around, cause nothing lasts forever anyway. Rick Roberts |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece! I can relate to it so well. I've felt everything you've written. The only advice I can give you is to hold on to your dreams as long as you can, and when you can hold on to them no longer, don't fight it. Just let it go. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Emotionally intense and very much expressive... beautiful poetry... JulieAnn, its great to read your poetry.. regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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