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Another Day |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Another Day Mystifyingly gay in the dawn shrouded day, creeping in to awaken the sky leaving another night to pass by and now that it is here at last, light will stream by much too fast, sending down warmth in all its splendor, from the high and distant sender. Bright are the shades of colors galore I swing my gaze from land to shore, I breathe a breath of fresh air my gaze becomes a mystic stare. As magic is a key of love unlocking doors to mysteries above, as you sleep, my darling one, feel loves' waves as they leave and come. As the sand will make your bed hear the cry of seagulls overhead, silently may you remember me as the wind whispers my name, Karilea. circa 1969 ©KRJ 24 June 2000 [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Karilea, This was BEAUTIFUL!! I felt this poem all the way through. Your writing has a tremdendously good affect one me. This one was like a sighful breeze just floating on air. Lovely poem! Take care. Amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Beautiful poem!!! I liked this one alot!! I love the way you write.....keep it up!!!  Julie :) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
It sounds like this was a very happy day! good work Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amy, any day I can get a piece written is a good day...thank you... Julie, that is a lovely compliment, thank you... Eric, all days are good days...it's the alternative days that scare me... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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