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You Complete Me
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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You Complete Me Amy M. Kennedy I've seen mountains and oceans of blue Experienced a lot in this life for my young age But I've never met someone like you You're like a familiar book…I want to keep turning the page You complete me, with you I feel whole When we are apart, I feel broken in half You sweetly captured my heart and soul We started out separate, now travel the same path We've both experienced so much pain Life deals some cruel blows The day I met you, my life was never the same In everything you do, your love clearly shows Together we are as one Apart we are lost, tossed out to sea This love is too powerful it can't be undone Forever, I will love you my sweet darling "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
mm hmm Beautiful words of love  Very well written Amy All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Together we are as one Apart we are lost, tossed out to sea This love is too powerful it can't be undone Forever, I will love you my sweet darling Beautiful sentiments. a lovely poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I reiterate what Jeffery and Brain have said! Amy, girl you've done it again! Another masterpiece of love from you. I loved the line: "You're like a familiar book...I want to keep turning the page." Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your muse has you working overtime Lucky us I knew a love like this once...This makes me remember it even more vividly. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
The whole message and content of this piece is just fabulous! You write your soul beautifully, I must say. SO glad I didn't miss this one! Back to page one it goes!  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Sweetness done by you and seems with the greatest of ease. This person seems to have affected your whole life....what a feeling that must be It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Love expressed with wonderfully beautiful sentiments, must be Amy writing this one... Nice Work, Amy, Regards, sudhir.. My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aim~ You're doing all of us proud this is a beautiful, love felt piece.Sweet thoughts remain after reading this..Thanks for sharing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for you kind replies. yes it's true I'm in LOVE!!! lol oh and what a wonderful feeling it is. but better yet i've just recently found out they love me too! yahoooo lol. thanks y'all for the encouragement as always take care. love, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Amy, Just beautiful, and so touching. Just like you. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you wear it well sunshine your positively glowing love ya, jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful sincere words Amy, nicely done. I hope you gave it to him |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That was very sweet, Amy!! Young love is cool!! Nicely done!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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