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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2000-06-11 01:08 PM


When I go walking in the park
Just to be alone
I get a ringing in my ears
That blasted mobile phone!

I reach into my pocket
To it's little greeny glow
But all I get is garbled words
It irritates me so

And if I'm strolling down the shops
Or in the supermart
It really does embarrass me
Ringing in the kart!

I see the people in the street
Their heads upon a shelf
Have they got problems with their neck?
And they're talking to them self

All the numbers in a row
With pesky little words
I really cannot fathom it
I find it quite absurd

I'd like to take my plastic friend
And stomp it in the ground
Then I could walk 'round my park
Without that ringing sound

Now with these words its seems at last
I've placed it in it's grave
I think this action on my part
My sanity will save

I don't want you to sit and cry
'bout it's gruesome LITTLE end
I'll bid you leave me on my own
I've got to call a friend

Jon Mewett


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-11 01:15 PM


~Haha....I love this...I absolutely love this.  Great writing.  Superbly appropriate subject matter...hehe.  I so understand. LOL. Thanks for the read. *Peace.
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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2 posted 2000-06-11 03:03 PM


Thanx Spitfire glad you enjoyed

Now what's that number?

Jon

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-06-11 04:54 PM


Oh thank you!  I wish everyone could do as you just did in your clever poem!  Well done ... well said ... bury those silly phones!  Great poem Jon!

Best wishes,
/Kit

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-06-11 06:04 PM


ah Jon I am proud to say I don't own a mobile phone.

great poem. I hear the only way to kill them is to throw them down the toilet. lol

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

manic street preachers
"Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair"

"I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP

"And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity
Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see
And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway
It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper.

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-06-11 09:57 PM


LOL this is great!!!  Sometimes I would love
to do the same thing to mine   And of course
there are other times that I can't seem to
operate with out it...not in the car though
it's OFF there      thanks for the  


[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-11-2000).]

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
6 posted 2000-06-12 01:38 AM


ROFL  I say, sometimes we're better off without all the new technology, save computers!  hehehe   I knew when I saw the title, this was going to be good!  LOL at Brian's suggestion of flushing!  HA HA  That's too funny!  Move over Mr. Goldfish!  *flush*  Call someone who cares!
Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 486
disbelief
7 posted 2000-06-12 01:46 AM


Well I hate to say it, but despite the possible out come, I must admit that I sell
mobile phones for a living. I am in fact the brain tumer merchant of death.  I'm also an indirect sales rep.  Oh well I guess none of us are perfect. Maybe I have spent just a little too much time on my own phone.

[This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 06-12-2000).]

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-06-12 05:26 AM


Thanx everybody  

So glad you all enjoyed this.

Hey Effigy some one has to do it!

By the way I still have mine...Shuusssshhhh!

Jon

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