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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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One Amy M. Kennedy *looks like my muse might be back*  One look into your eyes And I'm swept away forever One moment of your voice And I want to always be together One caress of your hand Sweetly upon my face And I am transfixed To another time, and another place One kiss from your lips And I am hopelessly in love Wanting to share the rest of my life with you With the angels watching from above One glance from you And my heart knows your mine Forever mesmerized and captivated By you my sweetheart, so utterly divine One moment in time with you I would save and keep close to me But luckily I don't have to settle for that You'll be with me for all eternity My soul-mate, the other half to who I am One look, one touch was all it took To open up my heart Was like opening the waters to a dam One moment of truth Between you and I Was all that it took To know we could no longer lie We can't turn back the hands of time And I never will want to Hearing you dedicate your love to me Has made me realize I truly madly deeply do love you! < !signature--> "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Very nice! Great emotion expressed here! So, do tell...are you truly, madly deeply in love?? Marie~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marie~ yes i am...completely and hopelessly. luckily for me, the feelings are returned! thanks for your reply andtake care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Amy, this is wonderful, filled with beauty and sweetness, So happy to hear that you are in love isnt it grand I wish you all the best Julie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks its safe to say your muse is back... MADLY AND TRULY BACK  love this one amy-girl.. full of love, and hope and promise .. all the things a heart and MUSE needs perfect poem...TRULY love ya jan |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The MUSE is back, of course it is... What more, it is back with a bunch of lovely gifted words too... regards, sudhir. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
"Truly madly deeply do" a great poem and a great song I enjoyed reading this alot. Thankyou Olias |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Beautifully said, a wonderful poem Amy. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your happiness and emotions just pour out of this so powerfully Amy! Beautiful sentiments for your soul mate ... wonderful expressions of love! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*sigh* Beautiful sentiments, beautiful poem Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful AMy.... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks everyone for reading and posting such lovely comments to this piece! You guys sure know how to make this girl S M I L E Love ya, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am a little kid standing there saying " I believe I believe" there really is love out there...thats so nice to know |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Amy~ I too believe so much in soulmates. I am so happy for you girl, for being truly madly and deeply in love! He must be proud of your talent as a poet. As usual, a beautiful poem from the depths of your beautiful heart. I only wish that I had my David to be truly madly and deeply in love with,  sighs...but I do love your poem so! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, This is a great poem my friend. I too believe in soulmates...so happy for you that you have found yours!!! You deserve it. Wishing you much happiness in the future. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very nice poem.....i too love someone like this...it is a wonderful feeling even though we are apart....our love for eachother will still be in our hearts,,,,as always you have expressed this well.... Julie :) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Amy, your sweetness shines thru in the poetry you write. Such expression of dedicated love is so refreshing. Coco |
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