Open Poetry #8 |
Simple but is it nice |
polishflyer New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 5 |
You are my soul my desire and my life. I love you forever now and later. I want to die knowing our love will surpass all time. I love you. I want to look in your eyes for the joy I bring. I want to hold your hands and bring them my warmth from with in. I want to make love to show my real passion for you. I want to kiss you to show my love is true. I want to lay next to you while you sleep. I want to wake next mroning with you by my side. I want to just love you and hold you until I die. You deserve the best I can give. You deserve only to be loved and to live. You look to see if true love exists. Baby why do you think after all this time I still persist |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
polishflyer, Great poem, I think it's abouta wife perhaps or maybe someone very close. Great description of that person. |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
polishflyer, Great poem, I think it's abouta wife perhaps or maybe someone very close. Great description of that person. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to passions!! I look forward to reading more from you! Please check your email for a special message. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is very sweet I liked it alot, Welcome to passions |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
polishflyer, Wonderful poem. Great entrance to our family. Welcome to Passions!! I want to find a love like this. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"You look to see if true love exists." Baby why do you think after all this time I still persist" Wonderful, passionate sentiments Polish Flyer ... well done! I really loved the closing ... Welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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