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~*Love's Laughter*~
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~*Love's Laughter*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~*LOVE'S LAUGHTER*~ Your laughter, full of love, hope and desire echoes softly in my awakened ears, setting my heart afire with passion... your carress, sends chills over my aroused skin, touching the very core of my soul that once was so lonely, filling the void - your love makes me whole, for, your laughter sings in my heart, a sensual, carefree whimsical melody of love, giving this broken winged bird the strength to fly again, soaring upon the wind of romance, an intoxicating, rejuvenating bliss, it inspires me forevermore *By Melissa Honeybee* [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh my goodness what a beautiful poem ! "giving this broken winged bird the strength to soar again" Awesome line ! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem...truly beautifully written. Great job, Melissa! "touching the very core of my soul that once was so lonely, filling the void - your love makes me whole," I love that!! I love it all, actually! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Very pretty. 'carefree whimsical melody of love, giving this broken winged bird the strength to fly again' Beautiful thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"carefree whimsical melody of love, giving this broken winged bird the strength to fly again" Melissa~ this poem was just sheer beautiful. i loved every stanza, each more beautiful than the last. The above stanza that I picked out is just lovely. You have an exceptional way with words my friend. Take care. Amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderful beautiful passionate poem. each line is perfection. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Melissa, Just beautiful... "Your laughter, full of love, hope and desire echoes softly in my awakened ears, setting my heart afire" That is, in words, what I felt when I woke up and heard her downstairs laughing. True love. Thank you for that memory. Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
So sweet and beautiful! Very lovely read! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Melissa! I'll have to echo all above ... "giving this broken winged bird the strength to fly again," ... incredibly lovely visual! Very well done indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When you care for someone you can really appreciate the joy of laughter and in my case I enjoy when my sweetheart looks into my eyes and when she holds me close and puts her legs over mine....I would call it Loves caress. James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I'm overwhelmed by all the kind replies! Thank you Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Melissa, this was so beautiful! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you very much Elizabeth Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wow Melissa. . . This is just wonderful. . . so soft and delicate. . . like a wisp of silk. . . Beautiful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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