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Until Wishes Come True |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Until Wishes Come True ~*Marge Tindal*~ If all of the things I wished for yesterday came true today I'd have you to look forward to tomorrow But until wishes come true I'll hold myself in slumber dreaming of you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This is as beautiful as you are. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Kisses to you this morning. And YOU my friend ... had better get some entries into the BOOK !  That's an order ! ! ~*Major Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
These fourteen lines speak more to me than a library of verse, Thankyou for sharing this Olias |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
luvit luvit luvit luvit... ohyouknowiluvit.....jeskeepemcomin lol. Did I mention I love this one??? chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Marge very romantic , sweet, and pink!!! LOVE IT TOO!!!  |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Yes....very pink!! Not just in colour but in words....wonderful! Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
You are wonderful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's the beauty of wishes Marge - we get to wish them over and over and you know it's fun wishing them! Great arrangement of words to make such romantic appeal. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Marge, forgive me, can't help myself... If wishes were horses and beggars would ride... then I would have you at my side... See what you did? Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ *SIGH* this is so romantic! just love it! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, you don't know how much I can relate to this. May all your wishes come true! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Loved it!! Great work as always....I almost get excited when I see one of your poems because I enjoy reading them so much.....you say so much with just a few words so well.  Julie :) |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is wondeful, Marge! Short and tender...all the right stuff! Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Olias~ Thank YOU for the niceties ! ChrisG~ You're so cute ! If you 'luvit' - I 'luvit' ! RomanticHeart~ I think 'romance' may be my middle name ! NotLikely2~ Well, I'm just 'in the pink' of things. Thanks. Jan~ And you are sweet to think so. Thank you. ETHome~ Thanks, hon. Wishes are so romantic, aren't they? Karilea~ LOL ! Glad to get you on a horse ! SEA~ You are as terminally romantic as I am - Stay that way ! LoveBug~ Yeah, I think I do know, young lady - and I'm glad ! JulieAnn~ What a super sweet comment. Gosh, I do thank you. Mariee~ Love seeing your reply, my friend. *Thanks to all for liking this little 'wish'. Love to each of you for your sweet responses. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
short and sweet, Marge! Corinne |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Whoa!!! How did I miss this one? Marge, You certainly come up with the most beautiful words WOW!!! p.s. You still ROCK! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! So beautiful! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Wonderful, I would be flying higher than a rainbow if that could happen. Awesome writing here as always. Love, Cerenity |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ This was lovely my friend. If only those wishes could come true... Perfect words to express a wonderful hope for the future. Great writing gal!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So when do I get to hold yourself in slumber, Marge ? Yesterday, you say? Darn! Missed out again  In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Was wishing I was going to find a wonderful poem when I clicked on your name.... voila.. but then... didn't have to wish too hard... enjoyed muchly. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Thanks for the 'sweet'. Jeffrey~ Awww ! You're still 'sweet'. Denise~ You are one 'beautiful' soul. Cerenity~ My friend, keep wishing ! LoneWolf~ Glad you also caught the 'hope'. Balladeer~ Day late ... *hug* short.  Darn it anyway ! Mike~ Awwwww ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
If wishes and dreams ever come true, My first wish and dream will be To go and see you!!! This is a lovely poem, Marge!! Love ya! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ You're so sweet. Thanks, hon. Oh, Lil' Lizzie~ You brought tears to this lady's eyes - How delightful the very thought of seeing you would be. Maybe someday ... I value your friendship so much. Thank you for being YOU ! Love ya' to pieces. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sigh ... I wish I could wish my muse was as energetic and talented as yours Marge? (closing eyes ... wishing ... wishing) sigh ... Wonderful poem Marge, truly delightful!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Hon ... I appreciate the responses to this simple little wish poem. I am apparently blessed with at least one of my muses who loves a sweet love song. Thanks for such a nice comment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Awe Marge---there you go again getting mushy...where do you get all that love inspiration? Oh, great poem! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Gosh, Marge, this is a real beauty...this in MHO definitely deserves to be in the book this sweet anticipation for a brighter future...Love it! who says waiting for your someone must be a miserable wait?going to check out your poetry more often,Marge..Register me as a member of your fan club! I DO Saying "I Do" with pride today Interwining our hearts for a brighter tomorrow I feel blessed-- the sparrows in my heart will never stop chirping now Only bemoaning that Why didn't i get to know YOU yesterday? for you, Marge...you inspired me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Why, hon ... it's just in my little heart. Thanks, gal. Kaile~ What sweet thoughts. Thank you for the little inspired piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Brett Martin Smith New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 4 |
Pictures may be worth a thousand words but these few words paint a thousand pictures... |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I have similar wishes Marge. I hope yours come true swiftly A lovely poem.Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrettMartinSmith~ Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Eric~ So nice of you to reply. May your wishes come true ! Thank you very much for the kind thoughts. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
But until wishes come true I'll hold myself in slumber dreaming of you Marge keep wishing, you never know and keep writing, beautiful poem. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely poem and I will definitely be looking for more of your works. As for the dreams and all those waiting -- All I can say is never give up hope they can come true; even if it takes 26 years or so. I know!!!! |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Another lovely poem, Marge! Loved it!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Thanks, hon. We all keep 'wishing'. MarkB~ Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. Lorraine~ So pleased that you enjoyed it, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a dear little poem with sentiment, Grand, from forth your sweet heart and inscribed by kind hand Wonderfully writ, my friend! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Thank you for such a sweet reply. I guess I underestimated this one - I'm caught in sweet surprise at the replies. Thanks for the poetic response. Love ya, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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