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What I heard
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What I heard |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What I heard The sun showed strong I closed my eyes And in the lights demise, Heard the whispering in the breeze, Gossiping of the trees. The leaves drummed sound upon the limbs Rustling like a hymn. Fell in faint and fluttering flight, Settling down in the night. Never a sound sounded so sweet, Those leaves beneath my feet. Never a carpets softer floor, Waited the fall of more. And passions crowned this hem of green, This green on brown serene. With never a more fluid bind, Then moved my primal mind. The sun showed strong I closed my eyes And in the darkness optimized. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sun showed strong I closed my eyes And in the lights demise, Heard the whispering in the breeze, Gossiping of the trees. The leaves drummed sound upon the limbs Rustling like a hymn. Fell in faint and fluttering flight, Settling down in the night. ------------------ The sun showed strong I closed my eyes And in the darkness optimized. -------------------- "optimized"...as did my eyes... as they took in the beauty found in this jewel of a poem perfect Sy, and as always... the rhyme is as smooth a butter. later-well-inspired-gator jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sy! Optimizing is an art!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This is so YOU ! And that's the biggest compliment I could pay ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Well you sure melted my butter with that cool comment. *L* Denise, Optimizing is an art. Thanks and *L* Marge, I optimize about you allot. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, this is classic Sy, So exquisite your poetry and passionate your heart Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour, my poetic pal~ Optimize yourself into the BOOK !  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What we can see with our eyes closed! Lovely! Corinne |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good optimizing, Sy  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What I read A great poem by Sy optimized am I |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Praise indeed from my high priestest of poetry. Love Sy Marge, I *L* you too. Corinne, Almost as lovely as you. Mike, Thanks, but nothing you can't do with your eyes open. Poet deVine, Your the greatest. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our optimistic optimizer optimizes well... now, as my granddaughter would say, "book it!" Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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