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Girl from my dreams.
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Girl from my dreams. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Her red hair Is red as a rose afire, So hot and steamy, Could set a demons desires. Red like an apple that Just fell form a tree So how much love does it Take to make her part of me? I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This side of you is very romantic, Would like to see more of this  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
liked this one -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a quote of Mike Myers's comes to mind. "she will be mine. oh yes, she will be mine." *LOL* enjoyed this one. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. I feel special. Thank you so much, it's wonderful. Jenn |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
JJ, this is soooo sweet!!! Very romantic Dark one!! Encore please......  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is sparkling hot and spicy love poem...what a delightful peek into the other side of you keep posting  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeremiah, I knew there was a romantic in there somewhere!!! This was beautiful my friend. Great poem!!  LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thanks for all your replies. and just to let you know i wrote this for a girl i go to school with named Jenn Cirrincione which just happens to be on here now. love you girl. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
why cant anyone write me a poem like this???? Very pretty... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
How sweet. I have to say this is one of the coolest things anyone's ever done for me. Thank you much. Jenn |
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