Open Poetry #8 |
My Guy is not Romantic |
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
My Guy is not Romantic I love to read poems written by others about sadness and happiness with their lovers love poems are something that I never write and I have reflected, how can that be right? I have known love and its thousands faces and have been many wonderful places I have keened for a lover that died and, oh, how romantic poems make me sigh My guy never says, I love you," to me but kisses me good-bye when he leaves my guy and I have snore wars and he loves my children from my husband before My guy never tells them, "I love you." But shows his love by the things he will do my guy has stood at each one of their sides and gone to their graduations filled with pride My guy knows all my secrets inside and his past to me, nothin' denied I know his sorrows, regrets and dreams and he smiles at my silly life schemes He never takes me out to go dancin' and there is absolutely no romancin' unless you count that glint in his eye and huggin' when he snags me up for some fantastic lovin' My guy doesn't care if I get fat can you imagine that? My guy encourages me to go out on the town and have fun without him around No, I have had my heady romances flowers, candy and wonderful dances men wooing me without integrity No, my non-romantic guy is all I need My guy and I have been hurt in the past with whispered words of love that didn't last My guy by no means is a romantic soul but his faithful heart is mine, this I know ~netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
God this was so tender and I could feel like I could cry...You have expressed this well and I think your guy sounds wonderful, you hold onto your non romantic guy he sounds too good to be true. Loved this netswan Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My guy and I have been hurt in the past with whispered words of love that didn't last My guy by no means is a romantic soul but his faithful heart is mine, this I know .... nay, I don't think so! Your guy is probably the most romantic in the world...expressing romance in words are not as precious as expressing them through such beautiful acts of tenderness and care... Stick to your guy, hold on to him for as long as you can....netswan... very well written sentiments here and every tender emotions, simply astounding... regadrs, sudhir. |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I laughed and I cried. This is so sweet. There is nothing so romantic as a really good man. You are very lucky. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Netswan how perfectly beautiful is this...Your happiness shines through brightly in this one. Bonnie |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Netswan~ yes he is romantic.....it's all in his heart...his poetry is in his faithfulness and his actions! From the sound of it I think you have yourself quite a guy! Excellent poem! - SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi Teresa, Wonderful poem you got here But I gotta disagree with the rest, he's not romantic, he's a slob LOL j/k Geeze...put down the gun All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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