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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Worried About what is not understood To the depth of the feeling Of that which is not yet seen So many things wrapped together A tangled mess of matter Will it someday all cave in Or be forgiven and forgotten A healing from the inside out No clue as to where it leads All the clutter deep within Trouble sleeping, wakeful nights Writing to bide the time So much from the past Which dwells within the soul From a little girl all the way up Survival a surprise yet is Looking at people living happy Seemingly so to the crowd Positivity and happy smiles Is what some do advise Instead feeling like crumbling Desperately not wanting to fall For a twist and turn on a tightrope A faltering step or a sudden slip All could come crashing down < !signature--> "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
JUSTBLEU!!!!!!! HELLO!!!!!!! How are you? And so nice to see your face... This is a lovely poem you have here... ''All the clutter deep within Trouble sleeping, wakeful nights Writing to bide the time' I know this feeling oh so well... once again - so nice to see you!  K ~Sleeping Beauty never knew how lucky she really was~ (Me) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hello Severn!!! It's been awhile since I've been here!! I returned just days ago!! I missed it here!! I am doing fine!! This place helps soo very much!! How are you????? It is comforting to know others can so relate!!  Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~JustBlue This is a very powerful piece! You write your emotions very well! I have only read a few poems by you and each one I have very much liked. Look forward to reading some more. Stick around.  Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Just Who..! Bleu do you think you can email me and send the URL for your home site. Rosemary and I would really like to gander on over. The one posted here says you are not available. Nice poem by the way. Dale Gwaltney (lucky) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Justbleu, a wonderful poem, I can soooo relate to it. Excellent! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
~Lucky.....I emailed you my webpage address!! Thank You for asking!!! ~Amy....that is sooo cool that you like my poetry!! Thank You!! ~Dark Angel....it is comforting when others can relate!! Thank You too!! Bridgette"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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