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lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-06-20 03:51 AM

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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

1 posted 2000-06-20 03:57 AM

i really enjoyed reading this poem of yours it was great. but i don't get the same meaning from the heart as i know you do.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

2 posted 2000-06-20 04:23 AM

Jeremiah,

She was to be my daughter... (and is) and there has also been other's... It is a writing... written from the possible eyes of my ever so loving wife, and if I could really see through her eyes and as clearly as she. She never wrote as to publish any such thus. But as you see, it, (she, our baby) meant a world to me. We have never had any of our own but we have adopted over 20 our youngest now is 17. Rosemary has told me however (in awe and great amazement) that I do see pretty clearly.

Thank you for seeing what you do see.

(lucky) Dale

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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-06-20 07:04 AM

Lucky~
You are a wonderful soft heart.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-06-20 09:06 AM

Oh Dale ... such soft and tender writings, how beautifully loving ... bless you both.

Best wishes,
/Kit

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

5 posted 2000-06-20 12:43 PM

Hi Marge,

I know you have already read this from our site... I think you've got a little softy in you too.

And Kit,

Always nice to hear your words Kit, I do think though the female gender has a little more tenderness than the gruf male. Now me..! I don't know what happened to me.

(P.S. This is Rosemary, wanting to add even though you have taken your poem out - lucky, how much I appreciate your love for our little baby girl after all these years. You're a marvelous husband, and I love you.)

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MagnoliaBlue
Member

since 2000-05-12

Posts 367

6 posted 2000-06-20 04:49 PM

Lucky...

Such a kind, sweet heart you have...but I bet your wife tells you that.

The world does not lack tenderness on the male side, as you have proven.

My skipper is so sweet and tender he brings tears to my eyes.

Your poetry(and RoseMary's) does not show up here often enough.

Good read.Thanks.

MagnoliaBlue

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